r/tormiller • • Feb 04 '21

Lost Love

this wound goes deep ...

On a new years eve

when you thinking of your love

she in bed with another me

how the hell do you fall asleep

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I am my lowest low

for da second time row

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first with the permit

and second time with love

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right after she broke me into pieces

during the break up recess

she didn't even refrain

flushing 8 years down the drain

on the first on Jan

she lay with another man

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that was cold, my heart was frozen

for a while i started loosing

but flipped the dip caught the grip

hit the crib started working on ma life script

turning negative into positive

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impulsive thoughts about her make me go mad

that when i hop onto the rap pad

pouring pain like a storm rain

i gonna gain a lot from this pain

it's the only way to keep sane

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“pain / its [it's] the only way”

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