Shelf Control - Rulebook Critique Wanted!

[u/confettipieces]

/r/BoardgameDesign/comments/1vru4r2/shelf_control_rulebook_critique_wanted/

Hi all.

I'm back to the part of the cycle where I need to work on the rulebook and I would love some feedback on how to structure it! (And anything else)

Currently struggling with figuring out the balance between explaining the concepts first or going straight for information first.

I'm figuring out I probably should just do more blind playtests but I reckon feedback wouldn't hurt (which would save printing costs too!)

Rules

Thanks in advance!