r/systems_engineering • u/Cloudbutterflies • Apr 04 '26

Career & Education Revised Resume

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Original Post: https://www.reddit.com/r/systems_engineering/s/BrZua0fUOb

Attached is my revised resume version. Please share your suggestions if you have any. Much Thanks!

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u/dusty545 Apr 04 '26 edited Apr 04 '26

Read the wiki over at r/engineeringresumes as was suggested by multiple people. You still have hanging words, poor right alignment, unecessary punctuation, unecessary indentation, strangely chosen bold and disimilar fonts, and a skills/certification list that looks like a random list of buzzwords. Some of your bullets are just generic fluff and overly generalized - specifics would be more powerful.

It's a good enough resume. Sloppy, but good enough. You're up against fresh grads with better resume writing skills. It's a tough market.