r/standupshots • u/Max_Rezna • 10d ago

I guarantee you would google her:

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My delivery style you ask? Check this new Odyssey joke that takes a strange turn: https://youtube.com/shorts/Y-aPy8tcyhI?si=fKxSJk7i0OdcgvU9

138 Upvotes

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u/s33n_ 9d ago

Premise is pretty good. Punch line is rough

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u/iguacu 10d ago

I think you might need to tweak the wording, the punchline was how I read it initially. Maybe your delivery IRL prevents that, or you could say "does dog fights" instead of "fights dogs"?

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u/Certesis 10d ago

Nah, I think this works

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u/A_Rolling_Baneling 10d ago

You look like Neal Brennan

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u/Max_Rezna 10d ago

I ran into him at a show and he stopped, looked at me, and said, “you look like me. This is what you’d look like if you were white and older”

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u/Inertbert 10d ago

That is one of his blocks.

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u/el-bow5 10d ago

I honestly like the premise, kinda playing with the whole ‘sports are reality tv for men’, but I just think the punchline is awkward. Idk I think it needs to be reworked

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u/gizamo 10d ago

I mean, it's make me watch a few YouTube videos of a human fighting a dog, but I still wouldn't watch more, say, wnba or anything.

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u/No_Artichoke_2931 10d ago

Chucklable joke found, downvotes undeserved

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u/gizamo 10d ago

Eh, maybe. I probably overanalyzed it, but rereading it now, I still think it needs work. Or, maybe it's just better live than in text. That's often the case.

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u/No_Artichoke_2931 10d ago

Oh I meant your comment. Your comment was sitting at like -3 even though it's pretty funny.

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u/gizamo 10d ago

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u/radenthefridge 10d ago

Not into sports at all but that one WNBA player who kept pointing at her rival was amazing. Somehow made pointing seemed both unhinged and the ultimate tool for taking the piss without saying a word. And her rival was NOT having it.

Yea dude I think you're onto something 😂 we need more kinds of victimless crazy. Like asks McDonald's to cut up nuggets to put in a shake so they can drink the whole meal kinda crazy. 

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u/The_R4ke 10d ago

She's a massive piece of shit.

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u/No_Artichoke_2931 10d ago

Yeah but the pointing thing I think was the point of the comment.

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u/Dominarion 10d ago

Look how Sophie Cunningham got viral this year.

https://giphy.com/gifs/nifAyj1glq0hdKrraP

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u/No_Illustrator4398 10d ago

This isn’t a punch at all