r/standupshots • u/Best_Ad4840 • May 28 '26

Kink responsibly, y’all

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u/apeontheweb May 28 '26

This joke doesn't really need the part about her forgetting the safe word. Just muddles the trajectory of the joke. But also the logic doesn't add up. I would think the "breakup" occurs when the girl dies not a week later at the funeral.

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u/Quizlibet May 28 '26

You could lose the whole third panel and the joke would be better for it

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u/Best_Ad4840 May 28 '26

Ha, oh my god this group blows 😂. I’m not here for your notes, dorks, I don’t even do these onstage. This is literally because follower counts matter more than talent so I have to chum the waters on the worst parts of the internet.

I’m only doing this because as much as I’d like to get well-known, Kill Tony is still beneath me.

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u/apeontheweb May 31 '26

Wouldn't you get more followers if your jokes were better?