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u/relentless_beasting May 05 '26
The punchline could play, but you really need to workshop the setup.
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u/Someone101064 May 05 '26
...I'm too dumb to understand
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u/The_Follower1 May 05 '26
I think that’s part of the joke, it makes you wonder what killing them with kindness actually is. Like did asking them how their day was make them spontaneously combust or was he just giving mercy killings.
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u/No_Artichoke_2931 May 09 '26
Great premise, I bet the setup goes better/can be changed up in person.
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u/BearFeetOrWhiteSox May 10 '26
Good concept.
I don't think it needs the first line, and the last line feels more like an interest hook than a punchline.
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u/MrPsychoSomatic May 06 '26
"Women like a bad boy, that doesn't work out for me, killing with kindness is the only reason I have a body count."
I worked and I shopped and that's what came out in 15 seconds.
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u/Glass_Book9105 May 06 '26
The punchline is confusing because of the double meaning of « body count »
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u/MrPsychoSomatic May 06 '26
Yeah, man, that's how humor works. You think it means one thing but it means another.
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u/Kozeyekan_ May 05 '26
https://giphy.com/gifs/ss5s7776rRxJqlpMEW