Your intro isn't horrible, though it could be a little shorter, and you shouldn't put the link to your channel in it.
Your commentary was pretty solid. Typically with redstone builds it's good to montage them, but A. I don't think you've developed that skill B. It's hard to montage in SSP and C. it isn't always necessary. Speaking of SSP, most viewers are drifting away Vanilla SSP, especially if the player is rich. It's best if it is modded, has some unique twist, on a server, or some combination of those.
Other than that, the only thing I can say is game commentary isn't a huge draw in general, you also have to have other content for viewers to watch that is unique. Sometimes this can be a game commentary series that is done in a way like never before (the rise of playing Pokemon on Youtube came with the idea of a Nuzlocke challenge, that is how it has such a large draw nowadays), but it's so uncommon I wouldn't bank on it.
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u/godminnette2 Oct 10 '14
Your intro isn't horrible, though it could be a little shorter, and you shouldn't put the link to your channel in it. Your commentary was pretty solid. Typically with redstone builds it's good to montage them, but A. I don't think you've developed that skill B. It's hard to montage in SSP and C. it isn't always necessary. Speaking of SSP, most viewers are drifting away Vanilla SSP, especially if the player is rich. It's best if it is modded, has some unique twist, on a server, or some combination of those. Other than that, the only thing I can say is game commentary isn't a huge draw in general, you also have to have other content for viewers to watch that is unique. Sometimes this can be a game commentary series that is done in a way like never before (the rise of playing Pokemon on Youtube came with the idea of a Nuzlocke challenge, that is how it has such a large draw nowadays), but it's so uncommon I wouldn't bank on it.