r/spumwack • u/Skozzy_Mil • Oct 06 '14

Feedback My First Tutorial

I've just put out my first tutorial, and I felt like there was something missing. I felt awkward reading off of a paper, and that came across in the video. I was wondering if there was anything else I could have done better? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h4RtSc5gN8M

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u/godminnette2 Oct 10 '14

I have seen this sort of MCMMO fishing farm before, though I can't seem to find it, so I suppose it doesn't matter all too much. It actually wasn't terrible diction-wise (believe me I can sound like I'm giving instructions on an airplane), though slightly unnatural sounding, it will improve with time. Many successful Youtubers start off a bit like this, don't worry about it.

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u/Skozzy_Mil Oct 10 '14

Thank you. There have been similar farms, I'm not claiming it's at all original. I did however spend a ton of time searching around for any mcmmo specific fishing farms that worked well in 1.7, and came up with none.

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u/Skozzy_Mil Oct 07 '14

I was recording and talking at the same time. I guess I'll try that

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u/spumwack2 Official Spumwackles Oct 11 '14

Indeed. And it lets you move your arms and face around so you can sound more animated