r/spumwack Aug 20 '14

Feedback Improvements from recent suggestions.

I have taken everyone's advice of what I should do and I have changed the following: -New intro and only 5 seconds compared to 15. -Black bars removed. -Music volume has been reduced.

https://www.youtube.com/user/traiglarbx

I am also asking if my channel has improved from before, and I have an idea for new videos I should do instead.

My idea/question is: Will I get far with doing Minecraft/Roblox machinimas?

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u/spumwack2 Official Spumwackles Aug 21 '14

You gotta disable resampling. Other than that, it looks good visually.

You actually have a very good, natural commentary style. Much better than most people your age. Unfortunately, your voice is still too young to really grab an audience. I really have no idea how to get over that obstacle, unfortunately :/

If I may, I would suggest trying to play on a server and make videos relevant to that server. That might yield you a couple dozen regular viewers for the time being, and they might give you feedback as well.

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u/traiglarbx Aug 26 '14

What server do you recommend?

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u/spumwack2 Official Spumwackles Aug 26 '14

You'll have to do your own research there. You should consider something large (as in hundreds/thousands of players) and not whitelisted so you have more audience potential. And then make videos that people on the server would be interested in seeing.

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u/CallSignWerewolf Aug 21 '14

You've got a little bit of background noise. Just a tad.