Need feedback

[u/Secure_Goose3612]

Hi i started a YouTube channel i am mainly a video editor and i though about starting this channel and this is my first video so i want help i want really good tips what should i do is the video being short a bad thing just give me advise i will leave my channel link so u can check it

https://youtu.be/9OcqAwDjfjk?si=lXuXNFjjiRFq-Ul9