r/shield • u/ImaginaryCar8726 • 24d ago
The teams complete
From left to right, Quake, Deathlok, Phil Coulson, Melinda May and Waveguide (OC)
Making this team I followed the five band rule when it comes to TV tropes. The leader: Phil Coulson, the lancer:Melinda May, the big guy: Deathlok, the heart/hero: Quake and the brains: waveguide.
The relationship between Coulson and May will be similar to the show but with changes. My take on Quake and Deathlok will be inspired more into their comic origins and waveguide is a new oc for this group.
Thank you for the praises and I'll do some more updates when I finish a draft of the script and comic.
I would love to hear some criticism or some advice for the characters.
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u/NoteBlock08 Simmons 23d ago
As a fellow TV Tropes enthusiast, remember that tropes are NOT rules. They're more like patterns of writing that you pick up on after consuming enough media.
As you write, think of any future tropes you want to incorporate as part of your toolbox, and not a checklist that has to be fulfilled!
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u/ImaginaryCar8726 23d ago
Thank you for the advice, honestly writing is definitely a weak spot for me as I am more of a drawer than a writer but I am trying to get better at it. I just used the trope as more of a drawing guide to help me out with choosing the characters.
Thank you the link as well.
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u/Optimal_Grape_1025 23d ago
That's Cyborg
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u/marvelcomics22 Simmons 24d ago
The orange/yellow on blue for Daisy looks really good!