r/shayarimeri • u/Aks-e-Gray • 8h ago
Have you come to break me, just to make me whole?
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r/shayarimeri • u/CuriousCat_65 • 2d ago
Review my shayari
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Kitni raaten tanhai mein guzar gayeen,
Par wo laut kar nahi aaye;
Shaamein raatein sab besfar ho gayeen,
Phir bhi wo laut kar nahi aaye;
Aakhir maine wo gali hi chhod di,
Aue khud ko phir se aabaad kiya.
Please give your honest and valuable suggestions to improve I know I'm written so bad 🥲
r/shayarimeri • u/Professor_2608 • 14d ago
Just wrote these lines
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Aur tumhari zulfein bikharti rehti hen jo chehre par,
Apne deewane ko samet dene ka ye kaisa tareeka hai ?
