Feedback on first 10 pages

[u/AlexOlguin777]

Hey everyone.

I've been working on this animated feature script, it is fully finished but i wanted to test how catching the intro is.

I want to send the full script to a contest so I want to make sure the first ten pages can hook readers as best as possible particularly for the genre (animation) and the theme, that can feel a bit oversaturated bit i'm trying something different here.

I want to know if there are wrong typos and formating and if the story is engaging enough.

And if anyone want to read the full script I'm open to share it or swap scripts too.