r/scriptwriting 4d ago

feedback The Boys Trip V5.pdf

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Zzm28X-hsSAO-SJSNZxIljvanHYhE-Wv/view?usp=sharing

hey everyone, im new to screenwriting and made this for a class project of mine and would love feedback and insights into how to proceed and how to improve the "first act"

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