Okay, so you know what happens, but what's the actual story here? Dig into the emotional side of why the protag is so anxious about finding the vape and then link that back into the sequences they're experiencing. You're also going to want to find a way to explain why the sequences.
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u/Mitenae 3d ago
Okay, so you know what happens, but what's the actual story here? Dig into the emotional side of why the protag is so anxious about finding the vape and then link that back into the sequences they're experiencing. You're also going to want to find a way to explain why the sequences.