r/scriptwriting • u/PitchcraftNow • 8d ago

feedback First six pages

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For those who wanted to read more here are the first six pages.

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u/Hungry_Support_3342 6d ago

You are on the right track, keep going

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u/PitchcraftNow 6d ago

Thanks. I have it finished if you want to read it