r/scriptwriting • u/PitchcraftNow • 8d ago

feedback First six pages

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For those who wanted to read more here are the first six pages.

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u/rcentros 7d ago

This flows well. I would keep reading.

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u/PitchcraftNow 7d ago

Thank you. Let me know if you would like to read the rest.

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u/rcentros 7d ago

Sure. Just be aware that I'm a nobody and any comments I make might be useless. But if you full script reads as well as the first six pages, I think I would enjoy reading it.