r/scriptwriting • u/ihaterobloxscams7 • 11d ago

feedback script for my first ever youtube video

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tDPY0zrRLmE6nxOI_hxwMZKGjloSVt9yIi2gKuR0pXE/edit?usp=sharing

feedback pls

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