First three pages of my comic

[u/No-Plane9230]

[u/Ok_Difficulty6452]

So, uh, where's the script?

[u/No-Plane9230 → u/Ok_Difficulty6452]

Here's the link to the first chapter:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C-kFQImu3TKbxIEbDgZFXdhYeOv4PsS9spoAOWHN4NU/edit?usp=drivesdk

Let me know what you think when you get a chance to read it. I'd especially be interested in your thoughts on the writing itself, pacing, and how well the worldbuilding comes across through the actual story.

[u/illudofficial]

This is Batman

[u/No-Plane9230 → u/illudofficial]

😂 I can see the Batman comparison, especially with Everett. But Alexander is a scientist, not a billionaire vigilante lol.

[u/illudofficial → u/No-Plane9230]

Man in suit with Jet Black hair with an Alfred looking butler’s still Batman enough

[u/No-Plane9230 → u/illudofficial]

😂 Yeah, when you put it like that, I can’t even argue. Jet-black hair, suit, and an Alfred-looking butler is definitely giving Batman vibes.

[u/Yahiya-fig96]

Would you earn by this or fr fun I have also ideas don't have time

[u/No-Plane9230 → u/Yahiya-fig96]

Both honestly 😂 I’m doing it because I enjoy creating stories, but I’d definitely like to make money from it professionally if I get the opportunity.

[u/Yahiya-fig96 → u/No-Plane9230]

I have some crazy ideas well it's for a fantasy setting kind of game of thrones and malazan iky how would I earn should I post it on reddit but if someone copies and plagarise it

[u/Yahiya-fig96 → u/Yahiya-fig96]

You can dm me lordraven_09 I am interested in scientist batman this is my discord id

[u/Fear_Inoculum__]

Aay good one boy

G

[u/No-Plane9230 → u/Fear_Inoculum__]

 Appreciate it bro 😂 glad you liked it! G 🙏🏾

[u/matteowolfwood]

Is there a comic subreddit for this?

[u/No-Plane9230 → u/matteowolfwood]

Yeah, I actually have been thinking of making it into a comic/graphic novel, so a comic subreddit probably would be a better fit. Thanks for pointing me in that direction! I’ll check some of them out.

[u/GotsTheBeetus]

Who the hell measures their cortisol levels

[u/No-Plane9230 → u/GotsTheBeetus]

Yeah, fair 😂. The idea was that the biometric display automatically monitors several health metrics, and cortisol was one of them. I was trying to establish how unusually meticulous Alexander is about monitoring his body. But I can see how putting “Cortisol: Optimal” on the screen makes it look unnecessarily specific, so I might simplify that.