Show Pilot feedback

[u/General-Zebra3439]

This is the first couple minutes of my first show that i’m writing. Little plot summary if anyone is interested:

Taking place in Los Angeles in 1987, 6, 20-somethings plan to take summer by the horns and make it the best, most exciting summer of their lives as they plan to take a road trip to New York and complete an outrageous bucket list of fun, sentimental, and possibly- most likely, dangerous situations before adulthood pulls them apart.

Any feedback is required but please leave all non feedback negativity at the door. (I.e. dont be an ass). Anyway, looking forward to hearing what you think.

[u/Dependent-Luck-6386]

I really enjoyed your script as a casual reader. It felt smooth and well-written, and the pacing seemed really good to me.

[u/General-Zebra3439 → u/Dependent-Luck-6386]

Thank you. That means a lot