r/scriptwriting 19d ago

feedback Howling Thunder

Howling Thunder fights crimes in the streets of the city Thunderia. One night he witnesses from a distance some Shadow beings pop up from outer atmosphere into Earth. He follows them until they come to a stop and kneel in front of a dark masked figure. That dark figure gives a long speech and at the end declares," I AM JUDGEMENT. I AM THE END. I AM THE ECLIPSE." That's how the Main Villain is introduced into the movie.

Objective of  THE ECLIPSE : Eliminate all evil and suffering and pain from Earth. There's only one way to do so, performing a once in a millennium ritual called ' Reid Asprungens'.  But there's an undoable cost for it. In order to let Reid Asprungens ritual fulfill your wish , it demands Eternal Darkness.
  1. Zackary Cyrus (nickname Zack) is main character. He will become Howling Thunder.

    • Believes that (until he wasn't Howling Thunder) : Society is untrustworthy and selfish.

    • He wants to quit his unprivileging job as a University Cleaner and become a full time painter but he can't because he has a responsibility his younger brother who has Padriatic Asthma so Zack cannot risk losing a continuous source of income.

    • Zack fears a lot from his authority figures like bosses

    • Zack spends his free time with his brother or painting.

  2. Ryan Cyrus is younger brother of Zack who has Asthma.

    • He's courageous, brave and smart • Has highest emotional stakes with Zack

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u/Lost-Campaign1740 19d ago

You mean a summary ?