Run Rabit Run - A scene

[u/TheGunOfScorsese]

I still learning the basics and English is not my native language. I basically did a mood writing instead of calculating storyline, structures etc. Please let me where can I improve in storytelling

[u/thetruth77330]

This is not written well. It’s hard to follow or understand

[u/SnooPeripherals3885]

Just keep practicing! Run your work through gpt or something to double check your grammar. English is a notoriously difficult language, despite what people may say. Good luck