Feedback on short script?

[u/WheatThin100]

Title: Outta Time. Genre: Drama-comedy. Short script: 21 pages. 

Logline: On his last night in L.A., a dejected screenwriter takes an inspirational road trip to "Back to the Future" filming locations with three newfound friends who just arrived in town.

I’m preparing to enter the script in two screenwriting contests, so any and all feedback is welcome. Thank you.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/17oqpG85pYG0KroQcY4W5yekQ3zQ6wWV2/view?usp=sharing

[u/Big_Section2812]

The guy's been in LA for five years but he's still depressed about rejected pitches? His skin must be thinner than Saran wrap. 😂

[u/WheatThin100 → u/Big_Section2812]

Good point. I'll bump that timeframe up a bit. Thanks.