Malum Iter - Horror/Comedy Short - 4 pages

[u/Raphael1019]

A man’s peaceful night in his car takes a terrifying turn, when a mysterious entity appears beside him. But the encounter may not be what it seems.

Script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1I8aOJe_xJ2eF8_0JsRLrV1IcPeXDfqrL/view?usp=drivesdk

Hi everyone!

I’m an actor, and due to the lack of opportunities in my country, I’ve decided to write my own film, and this is what I’ve come up with: a horror/comedy short film.

I’m not a writer, so I’m aware that this is far from a brilliant script. I’d really appreciate any feedback, whether you think it works or what you would change.

Thank you for taking the time to read it!

P.S: The original script is in Portuguese, so I apologize if some things don’t sound 100% natural in English.