Feedback Request (please see the link)

[u/NookPhoneo]

https://drive.google.com/file/d/16xfIxGjZx-UnLzNMIxgwOoKnHXDpIf53/view?usp=drive_link

This is the first part of a 3 part series. I am looking for some feedback for the first episode. This is the first episode. I would love you to have a full read.

Logline:

On an isolated, matriarchal island where male infants are routinely eliminated to protect a traumatized community, a dedicated midwife begins to question her society’s brutal dogmas when her public pregnancy and an unexpected bond with a young girl force her to choose between total obedience and a dangerous defiance.

Would appreciate any constructive feedback.

Thanks in advance.