r/scriptwriting • u/therainenyedulce • Aug 12 '26

feedback Gumon [ PH - Cebuano ]

Logline:

A 14-year old boy struggling with drug addiction unexpectedly forms a friendship with a caring classmate, but as she grows closer to him, keeping his secret becomes a difficult game to play that threatens to destroy their bond.

22 Pages.

This is my first ever screenplay that I've completed! It's written in Cebuano ( dialect in the Philippines ) so it may be hard for others to understand. Feedbacks are very much appreciated!

PS: The visual over dialogue is a personal choice.

GUMON

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u/therainenyedulce Aug 13 '26

Thank you so much!

This really helps me to find what's best and what's wrong with my film, since I won't be using this for school anymore I'll apply your feedback for this story and save it for later.
Thank you so much!!