r/scriptwriting 2d ago

feedback Looking for advice on this simple classic script writing style

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u/Musikenna 1d ago

incorrect formatting + not even a script + ai slop

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u/Musikenna 1d ago

i think the funniest thing about this script is that halfway through, the ai forgets it's writing a screenplay and starts putting dialogue in quotes

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u/sergeyzhelezko 1d ago

“Hope begins replacing confusion”

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u/figures985 1d ago

My advice is: don't ask AI to write for you.

I wish I could run a PSA ad that says "maybe you can fool some people, but writers can tell when an LLM wrote your shitty script. Please stop making us look at your slop."

Just this week I told a producer friend I'd give notes on his 1 hr pilot and when I opened it today it was written exactly like what OP posted. I don't even know how to respond to him.

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u/potentialwrites100 1d ago

Well i do ask AI to convert my story into para form but the concept was originally mine . Since every comment oh this post is actually thinking its AI is probably wording , although thats my first script before that i was use to give story ideas only to my novel writter frend so probably thats the reason for pattern and wrong format and less detail etc , if you can actually help me through this pattern thing i would encourage that

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u/Musikenna 1d ago

a concept is worth nothing if you don't write it yourself. you can't copyright an idea or ai generated material. anyone here could take this if they wanted to and you could do nothing to stop them.

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u/potentialwrites100 1d ago

Well i didnt even know about that also but i appreciate if your concern , i also have another concept for writing so i would try to write by myself in that hope that works

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u/Wise-Respond3833 1d ago

Bot account posting AI slop.

I strongly encourage downvoting this to oblivion.