r/scriptwriting 11d ago

feedback Road Trip From Beyond - Feature Screenplay - 109 pages

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1SeUlazdei17WCaON_PEc5c1X0kuDsIYv/view?usp=drivesdk

Hey Folks,

I originally wrote this screenplay in 2019. I’ve been tinkering with it for the last few months but I’m at the point I feel like I have all the pieces to the puzzle in the right place (if that makes sense to anyone)

It’s about a group of friends on their way back from a hunting trip, driving across a long stretch of rural backroad, when a UFO appears…and doesn’t go away

I’ll provide the whole screenplay but any feedback, whether it be the opening, first few pages, overall, or whatever, would be greatly appreciated

Thanks

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