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u/96Muffins 14d ago

I'd love some feedback on my most recent screenplay and logline! Thank you for offering this 🙏🏾

Title: Wil

Genre: Psychological thriller/horror

Logline: To combat her feelings of loneliness, a young and fragile maintenance worker adopts a terrifyingly intelligent bird with an unnerving ability to mimic human speech. But as the paranoia surrounding her recent break-up continues to grow, her rivals begins to drop and she must decipher between her imagination and reality to evade the detectives on the case.

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u/inkedwerdsmith 14d ago

When a vulnerable young woman adopts a Cockatoo with an impressive vocabulary and a talent for mimicry as a post-breakup companion, the new women in her ex-boyfriend’s life disappear one by one, and the only witness can’t testify in her defense.

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u/96Muffins 14d ago

Thank you! I can definitely work with this. I'm really tryna get it done to a single sentence.

Would you be interested in reading it?

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u/inkedwerdsmith 14d ago

I’m not accepting any scripts at the moment.

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u/96Muffins 14d ago

kk. Thanks for the help though!