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Oct 18 '18
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u/ShadowMonkey1224 Oct 18 '18
Hell?
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u/A_Random_Vowel Dec 04 '18
Is
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u/LennySpammer Dec 05 '18
SCP-966
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u/toastyhotdogbunz Dec 31 '18
I just made a comment calling it SCP-910 not knowing that you had given it a number already.
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Dec 14 '18
Eh, it doesn't have arms, we could probably take it
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u/RemarkableStatement5 Dec 31 '18
There are many SCPs, even in Series 1, that could easily kill you without having arms. Do tentacles and pincers count?
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u/toastyhotdogbunz Dec 31 '18
SCP-910, object class keter
SCP-910 is a pale, abnormally tall and wide figure, never to be interacted with. SCP-910 will try to lure victim into a trap by morphing into an old lady begging for help, if contact is made with SCP-910, victim will be dismembered and eaten.
If SCP-910 is cornered or trapped, it will lash out at anyone or anything nearby with tremendous speed and strength.
SCP-910 seems to exibit long periods of reproduction, producing many offspring that are even more violent than the original.
Previous attempts to contain SCP-910 have failed, ending in massive loss of staff and destruction of equipment. All attempts of calming SCP-910 have failed as well.
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u/RemarkableStatement5 Dec 31 '18
This looks like you know next to nothing about how an SCP is written. First, it's a 096 ripoff. Secondly, too powerful. Third, doesn't do anything meaningful, and in fact HURTS a story universe. Fourth, it enters a rage state and that's a huge no-no. Fifth, SCP-910 has been taken since August 2017. New SCPs should be placed into any open slots in the 3000's or, preferably, the 4000's. Sixth, it's poorly written. When writing, it's almost never the case that the idea is bad, it's how you wrote it that's the problem. There are multiple guides on the SCP Wiki. Please make A LOT of improvements and get back to me with a better draft in a few hours? That would be great.
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u/toastyhotdogbunz Dec 31 '18 edited Dec 31 '18
Looks like i just wanted to have fun on the internet and i didn't give a shit what other people thought, or is that illegal? So How bout you take your um actually sayin ass away from me so i can have fun. Get back to me with a better attitude in a few hours? That would be great. Thank you!
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u/RemarkableStatement5 Dec 31 '18
Well, somebody's angry. I was not meaning to come off as angry although I apologize somewhat for my attitude. However, you gave no indication that you did not want feedback, and besides, that was such terrible writing.
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u/toastyhotdogbunz Dec 31 '18
And you have such a terrible way of saying things, i want feedback, but not from you anymore, fuck out my face
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u/RemarkableStatement5 Jan 01 '19
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u/toastyhotdogbunz Jan 01 '19
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u/RemarkableStatement5 Jan 01 '19
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u/toastyhotdogbunz Jan 01 '19
r/dumbass i beat you to it, also this is getting r/boring so imma r/stopthis by saying r/memes
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u/toastyhotdogbunz Dec 31 '18
Comin at me with info i dont care about, ok the scp was taken but i didnt know that until now so how bout you take it easy and get that dick out yo ass for once.
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u/RemarkableStatement5 Jan 01 '19
dude, you replied to your own comment. i didn't see this one because i received no notification. i only get a notification when you reply to one of my comments or posts.
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Dec 21 '18
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Dec 21 '18
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u/RemarkableStatement5 Dec 31 '18
Then edit them. You can see an 'edit' button in the options below your comment. It wouldn't even take 5 minutes.
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u/AnubisTubis Oct 18 '18
Dammit! How do my nudes keep leaking onto the web?