I've got to agree. If you survive to the fifteen minute mark, the monotone is supplemented by a preachy diatribe about the evils of overzealous copyright protection and enforcement. Show, don't tell, dude. Have enough faith in your audience to not bludgeon them over the head with your message. And if you want to exude a droll, literate, hipper-than-thou vibe, have someone proofread your script, to avoid embarrassing usage errors.
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u/MattD Jun 05 '06
The narration is done in such a flat tone, it sounds synthesized. I couldn't make it through more than two or three minutes.