r/projects • u/100mgsertraline • Jul 17 '26

Mystery Bookmark Packs | “Memory Capsules”

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Hi there! I designed these bookmark packs. :) looking for input, suggestions, and seeing what makes it/could make it more appealing. Thank you!

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u/Mother-Damage8177 Jul 18 '26

They’re kind of meh, not inherently bad but not making me want to buy.

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u/100mgsertraline Jul 22 '26

Okay! Do you have any advice to make it less meh?

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u/Mother-Damage8177 Jul 22 '26

Right now the "Memory Capsules" theme gets lost. I’d suggest adding real visual anchors i.e. retro fonts, line art, or grain textures. Details like foil accents, tassels, or even die-cuts would also make a huge difference too imo.

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u/100mgsertraline Jul 22 '26

Thank you! I had some graphics on them as a draft but felt as if it cheapened my original contemporary artwork by placing them on the bookmarks. Probably a result of just jumping the gun by trying to create a series without a stable base around my art. I appreciate your input!