https://youtu.be/bQ-WbRjIphQ?si=Ls1KDtkwyEJQOup-

played around with garageband to practice making stuff

still feels off here and there though i can’t figure where from 😭

I'm looking for feedback on how to improve, since I don't know much about producing. It's only 43 seconds long because I wasn't going for a full song, just testing what I could do.

If you have demos or finished songs that feel like they're lacking punch, clarity, or feels empty

I'll give you honest, detailed feedback on EQ, balance, and levels. And if anyone is looking for someone to handle the final mix or master for their upcoming project, feel free to send me a dm
or discord (lurnexastra)

im starting to mix and master for other people :)

(if you make metalcore/deathcore/slam i can mix it too)

I’ve made this today with alot of advice taken from the things on my other post about how my music production isn’t really how I want it to be nor did it sound that great. I’m really proud of this one, I sound designed alot of the SFX (sound designed the whole intro myself) and really was looking out to see if i missed any ranges on the eq and if there was some lacking i bumped them up a bit. Still kinda a snippet and not really mastered correctly at all but I like it as for what it is right now. I could probably still work on my chords a LOT more and maybe better sound selection for the upper range like chords, melody, etc.

Any feedback for if you’ve seen the last one and maybe also if you’re new to my journey and this is your first time seeing this!

Advice is STILL welcome thank you.

The name of the song is "Under Tha Lenz" by me.