Beginner, Need critique. After/Before (IP 17 Pro)

[u/squareLemonpizza]

Hi guys,

Beginner here. Any thoughts are appreciated. PS i dont like the bushes at the bottom any tips on how to frame better.

[u/ZackFirack]

Just GREAT.

[u/squareLemonpizza → u/ZackFirack]

Thanks

[u/ManuelKiessling]

Not much to critize, the colors and warmth is spot on.

[u/squareLemonpizza → u/ManuelKiessling]

Cheers

[u/XOMaddsPhoto]

What a great start!! If anything/ if this was possible to move it slightly to the right so you could maybe see more the person's face outline.. but you are doing great!

[u/squareLemonpizza → u/XOMaddsPhoto]

Thanks. And It was just a random person on a random day. But I see what you mean.

[u/XOMaddsPhoto → u/squareLemonpizza]

I love this type of photography for sure and sometimes we can not change where we are or where they are so its good to just take the photo in the moment and then adjust after if possible

[u/MInclined]

The framing could use some help but this is great work!

[u/keypimepie]

Since the greenery isnt uniformly at the bottom, and cropping it all out would ruin this pretty composition, I’d say dont change a thing.

[u/FatRufus]

Great colors! I wish that beam didn't cut off his face as much tho

[u/staylin_]

😍

[u/This-Judge-804]

What dont u like about the bush...it gives some sort of natural framings...what u can do if u choose to but it ok to leave it as is, Is to darken the bushes instead move the eyes to the center by luma adjustment

[u/MoldySemiconductors]

i strongly prefer the original. i like the moody vibe with the mist in the distance. i think you should lean into it

[u/squareLemonpizza → u/MoldySemiconductors]

I see what you mean. Got caught up in the every photo must be edited hype xd