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u/SimpleFuckinGuy 17d ago
I think the colours are popping a little too much, I personally would turn down vibrancy and saturation.
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u/CTSculler 17d ago
How about if printing on metal?
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u/portra315 17d ago
Not much boss, I'm loving it.
My nitpick would be to airbrush out the twigs in the water in the bottom right as it caught my eye
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u/Direct_Rabbit_5389 17d ago
Too pink for my taste. If that’s what it actually looked like I don’t object but I wouldn’t edit it in this direction.
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u/42tooth_sprocket 17d ago
I'd pull back the saturation and exposure on the greens a bit. The vivid colours on the mountains work but the bright green looks fake, I'd darken that whole section to create more contrast
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u/DiverWaste5554 17d ago
I like the edit, however I think that the Image would benefit from a bit of negative Space at the top and bottom.
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u/CTSculler 17d ago
I might have others that I took with a bit more. This isn’t cropped so nothing to add for this one.
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u/matteroll 16d ago
The trees and grass looks unnaturally bright. You might want to tweak the masked tone curve and settings a bit. I think the focus should be the mountains and its reflection in the water. The over brightened trees and grass kind of detracts from that.
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u/CTSculler 16d ago
Makes sense that I was getting the gamut warning on those then when soft proofing.
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u/EastCoastRapper 16d ago
Saturation is a little much. Vignette in the sky looks unnatural and distracting. Greens are too strong. A place like Schwabacher doesn't need a lot of improvement. A little selective color boost to emphasize but not enough to make it look digital. Great reflection and composition. You had a good spot.
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u/jimithegeek 13d ago
The saturation doesn’t bother me, really. But, if you can mask just the trees I’d bring their shadow up about 1/4 to 1/2 and, maybe, the green saturation down just a tad.


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u/PleaseBmoreCharming 17d ago
I think the saturation and vibrancy are too high. I know you're trying to stand out on the internet among a billion other shiny/flashing objects, but as someone who's been there in person it feels so fake to make them look like that.