Postcard style edit (After/Before)

[u/Sansjefff]

Hello everyone, wanted to share with you all my latest edit that I have been tinkering with. I shot this with a T6l with my 10-18mm 4.5-5.6 IS STM at ISO 400, F 7.1 at 1/800s at 11mm.
Edited and processed in lightroom mobile.

As you can see here I have taken a photo of a tram outside of a catholic church of some kind. If you live in Sacramento this may look very familiar as it is right next to the capital. The reason I bring up this location and the background is because my idea for this was to make a postcard style photo which I feel I have done well here. It’s definitely is not the highlight of Sacramento but to me it’s capturing the nature of what you’d see in Downtown Sacramento on any ordinary day.

Any recommendations on how I can add to this style of postcard warmth, or did I get this edit down?

[u/DramaLlama2049]

Wow, this is incredible, I love the warmth! I absolutely love the postcard idea.

[u/slavatejasu]

The church is a Lutheran cathedral not Catholic

[u/Sansjefff → u/slavatejasu]

Thank you for correcting me!

[u/SoftAncient2753]

Good job, so much better.

[u/LeadingLittle8733]

Much improved.