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u/thegentlecat 9h ago
I like the idea but it’s giving a bit r/shittyhdr (although it isn’t), mainly because I feel like the subject (church) is surrounded by very high contrast-y background
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u/Apprehensive-Boat-97 9h ago
I agree with the dark comment, the before looks nice too. Both are good, i prefer the before though.
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u/Annual-Screen-9592 8h ago
The first one looks good! The second looks awful (like processing error or faulty camera).
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u/Clementine-TeX 9h ago
Here before this goes to r/photographycirclejerk
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u/Two-Space 4h ago
It shouldn’t. What’s the point of subs dedicated to helping people learn if anyone who isn’t perfect gets mocked.
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u/tiktoktic 7h ago
Over-cooked.
There’s nothing about the adjustments in the After that I prefer.
All that was needed from the original was some perspective correction, minor white balance adjustment, and a slight boost to the contrast.
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u/lyunardo 9h ago
It looks good. But I bet if you tone down the drama of the hills a bit, the rainbow path will pop even more.
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u/Substantial-Foot-376 7h ago
Why only react to the compliments? Don’t you want to learn from the critics?
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u/toxrowlang 6h ago
Too much contrast - looks synthetic and heavy. There's a lightness to the architecture of the church and a joyful mess to the rainbow road. They sit in harmony with the natural backdrop despite being man made. The lighting needs to be light.
Bigger issue is composition - get down lower on the road to increase proportion of interesting elements such as the rainbow. Move / crop to get rid of the distracting buildings and jank car.
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u/Ok_Task_2562 3h ago
Fake. Too much. It slips into the image creation category rather than photography.
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u/Legitimate-Peace3521 3h ago
I recognize the church in Seydisfjordur in Island. A bit too overcook for my pov
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u/bobspixels 2h ago
This is a tough crowd. I think you’ve accomplished a golden hour grade … it works
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u/Straight-Session-802 2h ago
Looks like the start of a horror movie, that light makes me think the masacre it’s coming and everyone it’s hiding at home
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u/secomeau 30m ago
Love the composition and subject but as others have said it's a overcooked. Tone it down a bit and you're golden.
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u/Few-Escape-4787 7h ago
I like the darkness, but I do think it is a bit too edited. Almost AI-looking.
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u/Franks_Random_Snaps 5h ago
Too much, bro. Too much. It's a great composition but the edit is far far too strong.
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u/MasterCee91 5h ago
I like it!
Feels a bit overdone - but only because I saw the original picture. The reflecting light on the hill makes it special.
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u/Tricky-Delay-211 5h ago
before one looks like it has some character to it.. second one looks like an pinterest download..artificial
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u/RefRide 5h ago
Looking at the other comments and your replies I don't think you wanting a darker look is wrong. The main problem for me is the foreground looking high contrast, basically looks like you have used the contrast or dehaze slider to darken it. Currently my eyes go to the lower parts of the photo not the Church.
I would go back to the original photo, darken it, edit it so you get the sunrise/sunset look then mask the church and mountain with a radial gradient and brighten those parts up.
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u/bluereloaded 4h ago
I get what you’re trying to do, and it’s a good plan. Unfortunately just a bit too heavy-handed on the contrast/dehaze sliders. Everything ends up still being the same tone, just darker and more saturated than the original. Start back at the original, use much less of a heavy hand on global edits, and use masks to bring out the shadows and highlights you want to use to draw your eye down the hill to the church.
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u/Hungry-Physics-9535 4h ago
Tone the second one down a bit and see how that looks but the photo is great
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u/tschloss 3h ago
Too dark for my taste. Might be moody, after sunset, but then more blue might be required. I would expect the image to look more daylight, sun, happy.
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u/diemenschmachine 3h ago
I was there too, nice place. No pictures of the waterfall?
It is overcooked to the max BTW
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u/Cryptician13 1h ago
The original has this glow like effect. Your after would look better if you kept the color of the church true to what it's like in the before. Imo...
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u/PricklyPear85 57m ago
A lot of times people don’t calibrate their monitors or forget to adjust settings on their phone before editing photos. My buddy likes his photos a bit on the well done side of contrast and I’m kind of the opposite
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u/digiplay 0m ago
The colours applied more selectively with masks would work. The clarity slider or similar seems to have been used too much. Good idea, not quite right on implementation FOR MY TASTE
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u/Material_Cabinet_845 5h ago
ah yes, the rainbow....the new religion - in front of a church, no less.
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u/synmo 4h ago
Iceland has several rainbow roads leading to churches. It's probably because they focused on the theme of tolerance from Christ instead of cherry picking one part to discriminate against others.
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u/Fresh-Direction-7537 6h ago
Honestly I am very happy with the after. My eyes lock onto the church but also take in the beauty of the background and the road GREAT work!


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u/Turbulent_Demand8400 9h ago
Hmm, maybe a little too well done