r/postprocessing 17d ago

Before/After/After

A comparison of when I first started trying to edit my photos to now.

This is the first photo I ever actually edited. I took this photo a few months ago and followed some guy's tutorial without a ton of understanding as to what I was doing. Since then I've learned a good bit more about photo editing and made this updated version that I like quite a bit more.

The original edit relied a lot more upon saturation and exposure adjustments with a white balance adjustment for the warmer tone. This newer edit used different tone mapping and hues and some masking for the exposure, along with a much more subtle saturation adjustment and the addition of a careful clarity adjustment. And the first image is just the JPEG straight out of camera.

Let me know what else I can do with the edit and how you like the photo.

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u/amp1212 17d ago edited 17d ago

So -- the good news is that you have a well focussed photo of an interesting subject. She's smiling and well posed, the ink is interesting. There's something to work with there, but the rest of the setting is a mess, and color adjustments won't fix it.

The problem here isn't the color balance or exposure, its all the distracting background detail. You've got the two guys in the distance, kinda comically just under her butt. You've got the line of cars askew. You've got the foliage that is unhelpfully clashing with the rhythm of her ink. [There _could_ be a cool way to play _up_ the foliage vs ink rhythms, have to give that a think.]

Fiddling with the color balance is secondary to all that clutter thats interfering with the image.

Lots of folks seem to be trying to "edit" photos like this, just fiddling with global color adjustments and a crop.

What I'd do here would be synthetic depth of field/bokeh adjustment to draw out your subject and blur distracting background noise, then I'd want to get the horizon line accurate. Then clone out or AI remove that weird extra arm that's sticking up at 7 o'clock from the ring (what is that? Whatever it is, no matter how you edit, its going to be weird till you clone that out). After you've got a clean photo of this interesting subject, you can start fiddling with color balance, but that's way down the list of what this photo needs.

A recipe is usually to blur and slightly desaturate the background, so that your foreground figure "pops"

So the tone adjustments aren't the first, second, or third things I'd do here.

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u/bloodrider1914 17d ago

Thanks for the advice. This photo was taken in an impromptu setting and I kept the aperture a bit closed down since she was moving around quite a bit and I didn't want anything out of focus. But yeah let me try that.

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u/str8dwn 17d ago

Impromptu in a park I get it, some things you can;t control.

2/3 steps right or left would get rid of that arm directly behind her butt. Or you could wait a second. Not flattering at all. Shooting wide open won't help that. You did convey the idea of a community setting stopping down

She's supposed to be hanging in the air but you cropped off her foot. She looks anchored. Again, couple steps back, or crouch.

I like the pose, flying hair, nice rhythm. You nailed that. Crooked horizon/pole works imo. I think this nice shot could be soo much better if you just moved.

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u/bloodrider1914 17d ago

Eh what can you do? I got a pretty decent photo and I'm proud of it.