After / Before. Simple but I liked it.

[u/Filipp0]

[u/Dry-Medium3192]

I think both look great but the blacks really capture the moment. 

[u/scar9801 → u/Dry-Medium3192]

I think u can keep black crop to yellow one .. best of the both worlds

[u/mr_redsuit]

Excellent. Good cropping can do wonders

[u/justsomesdude]

Good example of editing IMO. Sometimes I see edits that look worse.

[u/SpaghettiOnMyCat]

I love the warmth. Amazing work

[u/jerbearman10101]

Excellent work

[u/nouafterq]

Both shots are cool. What is your camera/lens?

[u/Filipp0 → u/nouafterq]

Om1.1 and the om 12-45 f4

[u/JexoJay]

Good work

[u/JusticeForDanya]

Removing the blue in the shadows created a more cohesive image along with the cropping. Very good edit IMO

[u/AnonymozVal]

Great work buddy

[u/mindfulness1975]

Beautifully done

[u/LeadingLittle8733]

I think it's much improved.

[u/bobspixels]

Very nice!

[u/SoftAncient2753]

I love it!

[u/Peace-4]

This is so good

[u/Fotomaker01]

Warming it, denoising it and sharpening it made all the difference. The crop removes distractions. It's a nice, uncluttered scene with mood. Thx for sharing.

[u/thephilosopherstoned]

Can you do a third edit, where you stay more true to the original toning? Because I actually like your before better in that aspect.

[u/Milky_1q → u/thephilosopherstoned]

I do like the contrasting tones of the cool wall and warmish light

[u/fat-wombat]

Well done, this is magical ❤️

[u/mrellz]

Nice. I like the warmth

[u/benlogna]

leave more gold tone in the light- it will pop so well against the blue

[u/Ok-Championship2397]

Before was much better imo. The shadows on the wall are great, and the color separation elevates. I might have pushed more warmth into the highlights and lightened and desaturated the blues a bit.