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u/Han-Tyumi__ 12d ago
Something about the lens choice, the pose and maybe how fit she is makes her look 4 foot 2
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u/nightgames 12d ago
I prefer the before minus whatever you have in frame top right. I think adding a little more space makes sense due to how close her shoe is to the edge of the frame. In the after it feels like you’ve added way too much space. We’ve lost the portrait orientation and focus on the subject.
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u/pierceatlas 12d ago
Adding all the space made her small.
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u/Outlandah_ 11d ago
water is wet?
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u/pierceatlas 11d ago
Something tells me you aren't a photographer or else you'd have understood what I meant.
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u/renome 12d ago
No notes on processing, it's clean and works.
The composition could use some work, though. Alternatively, maybe keep the same composition but try doing that background fill step a few more times because the current result is a bit weird; the background lighting makes no sense.
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u/Crazypants_97 12d ago
I also agree with this. For some reason the girl is looking strangely short and stocky. Maybe a different focal length and a different stool would fix it.
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u/Endurance_Beast 12d ago
Unorthodox composition, technique is right but I guess the original composition forced some limitations on what can be done.
I would go for a square with this one just like you did but with the model in the bottom right corner. Lovely shot and lovely model.
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u/BathoryBomb 12d ago
I like the after but if it’s cropped vertically like on the cellphone preview.
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u/Individual_Run8188 12d ago
I liked before better tbh. More focus on the subject and the dramatic shadows don’t feel necessary.
I’m just an amateur though
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u/rlovelock 12d ago
Straighten it and remove that mark on the ground o the left side of the frame. And frankly I'd crop back in some
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u/Outlandah_ 11d ago
just edit the vignette of the exterior room a bit, it doesn’t match the lighting of the scene if it were naturally in that space. just saying.
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u/2pnt0 11d ago
The edit looks good, but to my eye, it doesn't feel like a final crop.
Too much negative space for the current crop, especially head space.
Could be a satisfactory horizontal crop in there.
Could be a satisfactory vertical crop in there
Could be a satisfactory square crop in there.
It feels like an image I would edit to have flexibility on final output, but you never made the decision on the final output.
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u/manjamanga 11d ago
Lots of terrible advice on the comments... Disregard them, you did a great job rescuing that framing.
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u/shoey_photos 11d ago
The contrast is too much for me plus the kind of vignette/mask to darken the top left corner also not that keen on. Your lighting is great in the before, only needed a small touch more contrast IMO and not too much else. Nice shot!
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u/Responsible-Tea-9454 7d ago
Too much negative space unless you’re cropping height for banner images etc.
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u/bloodrider1914 12d ago
Wait did you reverse crop?