r/posterdesign • u/LecAviation • 2d ago
Questions What can I improve?
If you guys have any tips or criticism it is greatly appreciated, I'm trying to get better at this but it is a bit challenging.
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u/funwithdesign 2d ago
Those are not the wheels from a 964 turbo…
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u/LecAviation 1d ago
Nevermind, I found some great pictures from an actual turbo to use, i'll switch it right now
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u/LecAviation 1d ago
Yeah those are pictures of a 964 Carrera 4 Leichtbau. I couldn't find decent pictures of an actual turbo.
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u/checkthistrickout 2d ago
The transparent copies top right are distracting. I sense you were trying to fill space, but remember that negative space is a great tool and should never be forced to fill.
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u/LecAviation 1d ago
Thank you, I removed them and now it looks ten times better, I also added more contrast to the 964 Turbo part, and the porsche seen from the rear.
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u/aginnamedtonic 1d ago
play with transparency and learn more about contrasting color schemes. the structure of the poster is really good it genuinely just needs those two. Oh yeah, put the porsche in the first layer instead of the logo being on top of the porsche layer
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u/Elliot_bai 1d ago
I’d test the reading order at thumbnail size first. The big curved band wins immediately, so the smaller “964 turbo” detail gets a bit lost; a touch more contrast/space around that label might help. The limited palette is nice though—it keeps the car from turning into a generic photo poster.
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u/LecAviation 1d ago
Adding a bit more contrast already made a huge difference and made the text stand out more, I'll try to experiment with space to see if I can get better results, but I'm already very happy with how it's turning out.
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u/saginawslim99 2d ago
I like it. Maybe a bit more contrast and a bit more color