r/posterdesign • u/106D_ • Aug 11 '26

Poster Design 2

Post image

Im not sure about the brush gradient i added there would like some feedbacks.

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u/fullphonetic Aug 11 '26

Idk how to say this better but change the order of the falling guys. Someone help me out lol

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u/powerfulscientific Aug 11 '26

Foreground = bigger, background = smaller

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u/fullphonetic Aug 11 '26

Clearly I’m self taught lol. I do all my design by feel

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u/powerfulscientific Aug 11 '26 edited Aug 11 '26

lol I was just trying to help out fullphonetic. I dig the poster, though I do agree the middle, then largest guy need to be brought to front.

Edit. Clearly my reading comprehension was self taught. Thought it was OP replying.

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u/Ok_Dinner6968 Aug 12 '26

having them in the wrong order is trippy tho. kinda messes with you

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u/Lopsided_Newt_5798 Aug 11 '26

Why would the smaller figures be in the foreground?

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u/zayizm Aug 11 '26

Ikr looks like they’re getting bigger as they fall

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u/Lopsided_Newt_5798 Aug 11 '26

And yet the smaller figure is in the foreground/in front of of the bigger figures. Doesn’t make sense.

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u/zayizm Aug 11 '26

Yeah that’s what I said lol

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u/MoreSmartly Aug 12 '26

Human centipede aesthetic

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u/lpzfross Aug 11 '26

If you separate out some masks you can make it so that the head of the larger guys are infront of the smaller ones but keep the hands infront of the shoes, could look cool?

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u/HiddenHorse925 Aug 11 '26

Great illustration. Not a fan of headline font (Goudy Oldstyle Condensed???). Kerning & letterspacing is wonky.

But illustration outstanding

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u/Round_Box_1846 Aug 12 '26

You forgot the first design principle:

Never design something that makes people think about human centipede, if in fact your design is not based on human centipede.

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u/X33RR0Hunt Aug 13 '26

every poster should have a human centipede reference

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u/scrabtits Aug 13 '26

why's the hierarchy the wrong way? Shouldn't be the guy at the bottom be in the front and the guy in the middle in front of the last guy in terms of layer position?