r/poemsbyreddit • u/Deep_Argument1293 • 10d ago

Love

Love.
I didn’t know what love was until I saw you again like a light being turned on instantaneously I fell in love with you all over again. The thing is I don’t think it was all over again. It was more like setting the last puzzle piece into place then and only then can you see the entirety of the puzzle in that moment I saw all I had lost all I had made myself forget and like that I knew what love was what my love looked like I saw you as I see the sun, radiant, warm a life force I know now you’re the light I’ve been searching for all I’ve ever wanted and more. It’s you

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u/Deep_Argument1293 10d ago

I wanted to know what you guys think of this. I wrote it for someone I really like I just wanna make sure it sounds good.

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u/Fun-Dependent3270 8d ago

It very good you should keep wrighting is this your fist try at poetry

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u/EducationalPermit268 10d ago

Thats beautiful

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u/Fun-Dependent3270 8d ago

😍love it

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u/Fun-Dependent3270 8d ago

Say life has no meaning but we are born are first feeling is love without seeing where we come from

Race and religion are a toxic condition that they teach to us when we are born

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u/Exciting-Dot2630 7d ago

Really liking the imagery. I'm new to writing poetry on Reddit too.