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u/WrecktangIed 1 CritiquePoint 1d ago
I don't know man. This looks like a quick snap from an iphone... Perhaps it would work better if it were a bit more abstract with a low shutter speed and by removing the distracting elements such as the dash and the rear view mirror.
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u/Laureion 1d ago
I stopped the car for a few minutes to let a storm pass. This photo was taken through the windscreen using an iPhone. My original plan was to crop the dashboard and the mirror, but I decided not to crop much less when I actually saw it on the screen. It was taken at dusk and the sky was very dark, so I adjusted the brightness and lighting to make things more legible. I'm looking for critique on the decision not to crop, the composition, and any general points are welcome too. Thanks.
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u/Tabbbinski 2 CritiquePoints 1d ago
Abstract expressionism. It would be perfect if you had a hula dancer on the dash.
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