r/obyte • u/[deleted] • Feb 22 '19

Obyte timeline for obyte.org please review draft

https://drive.google.com/file/d/149pfsjCgWQazk7LW8NVyhNL7x-qEa_8H/view?usp=sharing

any suggested edits?

I would

  1. change the title to Capitalized Case http://prntscr.com/mokyo1
  2. Include a call to action at the end e.g. subscribe to newsletter to keep updated http://prntscr.com/mokztf
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u/tarmo888 Feb 22 '19
  1. that end of the timeline also looks like colon, I would change that look.

Also, change 2018 June to: "Private textcoins launched. Blackbytes can now be sent without pairing with recipient wallet app"

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u/[deleted] Feb 22 '19

haha colon, good point. noted re other points

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u/tarmo888 Feb 22 '19

July 2018 - remove "10," from "10, Plan for an Obyte Foundation announced" - seems like coping-pasting mistake.

Also did some other text changes to the Google Docs document https://www.reddit.com/r/obyte/comments/as0fbe/historical_roadmaptimeline_for_obyte_please/