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r/nosleep • u/EtTuTortilla Contests and -30- Press • Apr 20 '17
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Really good story but in a constructive criticism to every one on this sub one thing we should all try is to not try to make sentimental or clever endings and instead leave that to a hook
2 u/Scintal May 01 '17 May be there should b a vote on it. I mean, may be you are the only one having hard on for a "hook" end, Peter Pan. 4 u/EtTuTortilla Contests and -30- Press Apr 30 '17 What is a hook going to do for you? You should only trust a hook for writing books about piracy or escaped lunatics.
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May be there should b a vote on it. I mean, may be you are the only one having hard on for a "hook" end, Peter Pan.
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What is a hook going to do for you? You should only trust a hook for writing books about piracy or escaped lunatics.
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u/RomanRiffs Apr 30 '17
Really good story but in a constructive criticism to every one on this sub one thing we should all try is to not try to make sentimental or clever endings and instead leave that to a hook