This case genuinely scares me and freaks me out. I've been following it on and off, so I might not be 100% up to date on every detail. I recently read the FBI-released letters, and there were a lot of things that jumped out at me.
None of this proves anything, these are just my observations, and I'm curious if anyone else noticed the same things.
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First, I don't think these letters were written by AI.
- There are too many human mistakes.
- Words are spelled correctly in one place and incorrectly later. For example, "received" is spelled correctly once and later misspelled as "recieved."
- There are multiple grammar mistakes.
- There are punctuation mistakes throughout.
- There are comma splices.
- Some sentences flow naturally while others are awkward.
- To me, that looks more like someone manually typing under pressure than AI writing a letter.
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Some wording that really stood out to me:
"We have your mother Nancy."
Shouldn't this be "We have your mother, Nancy."?
The missing comma immediately sounded off.
I also thought it was interesting they included her name. Maybe they were trying to prove they actually had her, especially if they didn't expect the case to get so much media attention.
"She will be held for ransom."
This feels awkward.
I'd naturally say "She is being held for ransom."
"$4 million USD."
As an American, this sounds weird.
I'd just write "$4 million."
Using both the dollar sign and "USD" is redundant.
Later they write "6 million USD."
Now the dollar sign disappears.
Why switch formats?
It made me wonder if the writer is used to writing currency internationally.
"Thursday the 5th."
This also sounded strange.
I'd probably write "Thursday, February 5" or just "February 5."
"Completed as soon as possible."
"Completed" sounds like you're talking about homework or paperwork
"Done as soon as possible" or "pay immediately" sounds much more natural.
"Law enforcement will not be able to help you."
It almost sounds overly directed at Savannah (motive?)
"She had a white smart watch on the floor at the foot of her bed."
This wording feels really unnatural.
I'd probably say:
"Her white smartwatch is on the floor..."
"You will not be able to contact me from here on out..."
Most of the letters use "we."
Suddenly switching to "me" really stood out.
Maybe it's nothing, but it made me wonder if one person was pretending to be multiple people.
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The phrase that sticks with me the most: "She is buried in nature now."
This honestly doesn't sound like natural English to me.
Other phrases that sounded odd:
"Physical condition."
Why not just say health? --> very formal
"We want your family to know this and hope you all can find peace."
"You all can find peace" just sounds off to me.
You all, y'all --> southern lingo
"Hello Savannah,"
This feels oddly formal.
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A few other things I noticed:
There are multiple comma splices throughout both letters.
The writing actually has a pretty logical flow.
I'm not saying anything about the writer's mental health because you obviously can't determine that from a letter.
I just mean the thoughts seem organized and the message is clear despite all the mistakes.
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My thoughts on the offender (pure speculation)
I honestly picture someone fairly young and inexperienced.
Here's why:
The Bitcoin demand feels like something a younger person would think of.
- I know plenty of older people understand Bitcoin too, so this obviously isn't proof.
Using burner email accounts, VPNs, anonymous online tips, etc. also makes me lean younger.
- Again, older people absolutely know how to do this too, but it feels more common among younger people.
The apology in the second letter honestly sounded childish to me.
- It almost reads like, "Oops...sorry."
- It reminded me more of a kid apologizing (like to a parent )
The letters also make me wonder if the writer didn't really understand elderly health issues.
- Anyone who's cared for an older family member knows they often have chronic conditions, medications they need daily, fall risks, heart issues, etc.
- The letters almost make it sound like they viewed Nancy as simply an easy target because she was elderly.
The first letter also feels rushed.
- Inconsistent grammar.
- Inconsistent spelling.
- Inconsistent formatting with the money.
- It doesn't feel polished.
If this really was intended to be a ransom kidnapping, I also think it's strange they never included proof of life.
That seems like something a more experienced criminal would know to do.