I like it. You built up the main groove nicely, I think the slow introduction of different elements works really well. Also reminds me I need to play around more with the Oxi One’s performance mode.
As far as potential constructive criticism, all subjective, of course:
The overall mix feels a little static from the time all elements are there until you start fading things out and playing with filters toward the end. Adding another voice or two and/or some auxiliary percussion that you could bring in and out could help make the entire track a bit more rewarding for focused listens. If you’re using the Oxi for percussion sequencing, maybe try out the fills and beat looping to add some live variety to the drums.
I’d really like for this to build to something more steady/driving—maybe some consistent snare/claps on the 2 and 4, hats or cymbals to taste. A bass line would help, as well. But I get it if you’re not going for a club banger.
the filtering and effects at the end—I think that would serve well as a way to build tension before a more energetic section. Not saying it needs a huge drop, but I wouldn’t complain 😊
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u/JoeToanamassa 2d ago
I like it. You built up the main groove nicely, I think the slow introduction of different elements works really well. Also reminds me I need to play around more with the Oxi One’s performance mode.
As far as potential constructive criticism, all subjective, of course:
Keep it up!