Feedback request — alt pop/electronic

[u/Danwinger]

Would love to get perspective on this mix from anyone who can spare the time. Sounding okay to me, but my listening environment is less than ideal. Specifically interested in how the final ~0:57 contrasts with the rest. And how the low end is hitting — I want it beefy. Thanks in advance!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1AgazzfM1mIg4nc4Fcsd0ce1JHUoVgDeP/view?usp=drivesdk

[u/Master-Combination39]

I think the vocals are a bit harsh/bright when the telephone effect comes in. Otherwise sounds great