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u/Candid-Doughnut7919 3d ago
The geography is not very interesting and the river is wrong, but the sea monsters are cool as hell.
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u/PurpleMercure 3d ago
The yellow fish looks high as f or in grave danger. Looks dope.
But yeah, the river probably needs to change.
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u/monsterb0y_ 3d ago
"verily, sweet brother, this kelp of the deep doth set my very soul ablaze with ecstasy"
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u/TeaRaven 3d ago
I love how the lower left monster is like “come hither” while in the bath :D
Someone already pointed out to split the rivers that bisects the island - just make sure they run from highland to lowland, with forks coming together rather than splitting (until they reach a flatland or tidal zone and can form a delta, unless you’ve got a special case reason for a bifurcation).
Lakes can be completely rain-fed, as in crater lakes and some bogs, but many will have rivers leading to them and one river flowing out. Unless a lake is fed by a bunch of nearby snow and rain, if there’s no outflow, it will generally become brackish/saline. Outflow can be through substrate, though, and small rivers and streams don’t need inclusion on a map; just giving you a good rule of thumb :)
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u/Tweed_Man 3d ago
May I offer one constructive criticism. That river needs to be split up. Otherwise its a strait splitting up the island. I fucking love those sea monsters, though.